Story Idea: Constellar path

In the year of 2020, You are a Astrologist who believes that the stars are the truth behind futuristic visions. Your girlfriend(she was also an astrologist who loved the space and sky) who died in an accident(flashback) made you have a horrible density of guilt and sadness in you heart that made you want to give up on this job since your girlfriend is not here anymore(she inspired you to become an astrologist). One day you woke up hearing a knock on your door when you go open it it was your dad(Astronaut) that you havent seen in many ages and comes to talk about the great take-off beginning tomorrow.You decide to go and watch it but on your way you see your dad holding a luggage and asks him what is in that luggage, it was a telegram machine he wanted to give for your upcoming birthday so you can contact through reading the telegram whether the person is dead or not. On your way inside the dad's car you had an accident but your dad couldnt make it(he's dead with hooked up telegram machine) and you were healed in a couple of months. Suddenly you hear the telegram machine beeping and then trans-scripted into words that said *son i hope you can be strong, i know that you lost your girlfriend and me but you have to go on and continue to believe in astronomy*. So you went inside NASA and want to complete the father's request by being in his position and see more of the stars. As you go on the rocket you begin to have flashbacks of your girlfriend that told you about the truth behind the milkyway galaxy. She said that if you go pass te orion-cygnus arm you can see when the world shall end. As you prepare for take off you ask NASA if you can go to the milkyway galaxy for a closer look and they accepted your request. As you wear the galaxion 3XII(suit) you began for take off. Once your inside milky way galaxy you go through every star and experience alien difficulties.In the final star you see a spirit of your girlfriend and she says *the world won't end because it shall be reborned into a better world where for us human race may live*. Then a huge light shines and you see images of the ancient earth being borned and then you see the history of the mayan's of how they lived their life. Soon later you remember that your girlfriends hand also has the mayan tribes symbol..............(continue on if you want or add more to it. I did this freewrite)

Well you have some great ideas in mind. i can easly use this if we need ideas for our next games. so thank you and i hope we can use this


Edit:: Crowseph5: He may be blunt but he means well, me i'm just too lazy to write my own response.

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